Premises

One of our early stages of film planning was to create some premises, which is a one sentence summary of my film.

1- A supernatural thriller in which a journalist uncovers the truth of an abandoned factory.

2- A disgraced journalist tries to redeem himself by covering the story of the mysterious abandoned factory. 

3- A journalist tries to prove himself as a writer by covering the story of a factory, facing all sorts of danger on the way.

I prefer my second premise as opposed to the other two because it lets out all of the appropriate information without giving too much away which I feel is important. It is also the only one that actually explains the journalist's situation.